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OK, please don't hate me because this was supposed to be...well....a chapter that you all have been anticipating....but it turned out to be long....very long....ELEVEN PAGES long....so I had to cut it...
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I don't know about anyone else, but I wouldn't mind having to read 11 pages. This was a sweet chapter and a nice warm up to the main event. There will be a main event won't there?
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I smell more than stew coming up in the near future. I'm thinking that there will be a wedding to plan for soon!
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Woo! I can just picture Heath drying off........*ker-thunk!* Verrrrry nice! Ahem...anyway...Loved the chapter, especially seeing Heath doting on Jenny. I could just picture him stroking her hair as...
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That was a lovely chapter and I like Victoria's idea about the Craddock house. It will be interesting to see how Jenny reacts when the plan is proposed to her. Excellent writing. Hurry back!
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THUD!! I was so hoping he was going to be the nekked brother. That was such a lovely chapter I don't mind waiting one more for THE MOMENT!! "As a matter of fact," Heath thought to himself as he heard...
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As a matter of fact," Heath thought to himself as he heard Jenny coming down the stairs, "If I have my way, this evening's going to be full of new beginnings." A lot of first in this fic for one Heath...
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The only thing that could make this story even better than it already is, was the mental picture of Heath getting out of that tub! Debbie
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Okay... image of "nekky Heath" rubbing himself dry with a towel was ALMOST as good as that smooch we're gonna get one of these years. Ah, heck! It was REALLY good! (WINK)... I'm liking Heath's closing...
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11 pages isn't too many, not when you stopped there. Hurry back Sara. Waiting on the new beginnings Heath is talking about.
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What a wonderful and sweet chapter. I could just imagine the two falling asleep and being fussed over by the others. So very sweet an image. I loved the brotherly banter. And I knew that she'd end up...
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Well....the story was so good, i ididn't even notice that Heath was nekkid. It was just lovely, sounds like all the Barkley's are planning for Jenny to stay. You know it's a sign of a great writer...
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It's about time Heath took some initiative! Can't wait for the rest of it!
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Lovely chapter Sara!!! So good to read it!!! I loved it but ... !!! What are you doing with us??? Hurry back, Vivian
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Easy to get sidetracked when contemplating Heath's nekkid-idity and the good fortune of that liniment to be slathered all over his glorious chestal region ... but two things to say. First, it didn't...
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